A little while back ,I participated in a 50- word horror story competition online. I penned down two stories.Here goes the first one . While some of my friends found it spooky, some others found it funny.Do read and tell me your opinion!
His girlfriend wanted an abortion. He was angry ,frustrated and eventually killed her in the bath tub.Seven years later, his wife complained that his daughter didn’t want to take bath.The little girl said that she didn’t want to drown in the bath tub AGAIN!!!
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I’ll be honest. I didn’t find it to be funny. Spooky – yes! Horror – not really.
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Thankyou for your words and yes I agree it’s not exactly horror!
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Happy to help!
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It’s creative but even I didn’t feel horror!
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Even I didn’t think so but there’s only so much we can do with 50 words ;-)Anyways I hope you find the next one spooky!
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That’s true! Anyways Good luck!
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Damn creative..!!
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Glad you think so!
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Ohh! That was spooky, but with a good message.
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Thanks for stopping by Gargi
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Brilliant creative writing.
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Thankyou so much!
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Welcome friend.
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That’s spooky…nicely done in 50 words 🙂
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That would sure make a horror story!
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I found it spooky😮
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Interesting, I’m wondering its amazing how you manage your time and spare some for such creativity and posting it here while my final year doesn’t even give me time enough to get thoughts into my head forget putting them down somewhere :p Amazing on your part though! Kudos to you, keep writing! 🙂
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it wasn’t funny rather it is a very creative imagination. I too at times write something or the other but surely writing a short piece is toughest. well done
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That was very creative, I get spooked really quickly so def on the spooky side I’d say! 😬 Good job! 😉
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Spooky it is!☺☺ And very thoughtful!
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I have a (?) spooky to an extent. ..but wait!! Don’t want to be drowned AGAIN? hmmm
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Whoa, that was creepy!
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